Town and cities are attractive places. Some people suggest that the government should spend money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues to make them better to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are people asserting that authorities should allocate budget to artistic schemes which make the cities more attractive to city dwellers.

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with, there are other plans which are more beneficial for citizens than erecting statues in the streets.

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, the budget of governments is limited, so they ought to choose between numerous plans

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and approve schemes that can bring more prosperity to people.

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, many cities have poor public transportation systems;

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the mayors should alter buses and subways

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of paying for artwork. Another argument against

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idea is that taste in art varies between people.

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, a piece of art may seem very charming to a person

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it would be a meaningless object to another person.

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, it would be an impossible mission for authorities in charge of choosing artworks for the cities to find a work that everybody likes

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. The alternative is for everybody to pay for the genre that appeals to them, and not allocate the government to these plans. In conclusion,

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many folk believe that it is the government's obligation to spend public funds on artistic works which can be presented in the city streets, I disagree with

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artistic taste is not similar in society, and the public budget is restricted.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Appropriate word count

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239 words

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Town and cities are attractive places. Some people suggest that the government should spend money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues to make them better to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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