You recently had a meal in a restaurant, but you were not happy with the service that you received. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter * tell him/her why you had chosen this restaurant for your meal * explain why you were not happy with the service you received. * say what you would like the manager to do about this.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that, I recently dined in your fancy restaurant and I am not happy about the services your fine establishment rendered.

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, I would like to express the reason I chose to have supper at your diner. One of my closest friends persuaded me to try a meal, and he forwarded some good comments as well.

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, your establishment has gained public attention through social media, majority of people who follows your online platforms, seemed happy about your service.

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, I wanted to try some dishes from the world-renowned chef, Gordon Ramsy. One of the major drawbacks that I have to point out is, the customer service that you currently offer is not up to the standard. As the main reason for

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, I saw there are so many young individuals representing your staff, and they lack training in how to communicate with consumers.

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, the time I had to wait for the food after ordering was unbearable and when the food was served, it was room temperature and I could not eat it. I would like to forward a suggestion to improve your employees, As they lack in training, I think they should undergo more intense coaching. I am looking forward to feasting with you again. Faithfully, Devin Vindula

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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217 words

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