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The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008.

The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008.
#show #percentage #time #adults #activities #country
The given pie graphs reveal the proportion of time
for
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apply
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working adults
who
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apply
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spent on particular
activities
 in a country between 1958-2008.
Overall
, working was the most significant activity for a working adult for both years, but going to work and going out/other
activities
 took the least percentages of
day
 in 1958 and 2008 respectively. In 1958, working took nearly 1/3 of a
day
 of an adult.
Moreover
, sleeping was
following
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followed
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with
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by
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 32% of
day
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the day
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. Going out with friends or family members was higher than the combination of relaxing at home and other
activities
such
 as hobbies or playing
sport
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sports
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. Travelling
to
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apply
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home contributed 2% to daily
activities
 which
was
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were
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 approximately took half an hour a
day
. Fifty years later, working and going to work took half of a
day
 of an adult
whereas
 sleeping time
approximately
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was approximately
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 1/4 of a
day
 which was reduced by 7
percentages
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per cent
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 compared to 1958. Other 1/4 of
time
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my time
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spended
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spent
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 by relaxing at home, going out with other people, and
other
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doing other
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activities
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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