The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise it.

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise it.
The pie chart
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illustrates the percentage of the most to least popular of Britain recreational places which visitors visited in 1999.
Overall
, the most visited area was Theme Parks with
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percentage of 38%. It was slightly different with Museums and galleries
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visitors
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with the difference
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by 1
percent
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per cent
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.
In contrast
, the least visited
place
was Wildlife Parks and Zoos which is only 9
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percent
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. Within Theme Parks, the majority of people visited Blackpool pleasure beach until it reached the highest visiting
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about 47
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percent
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.
While
, Alton Towers and Pleasureland in the Soutports became the second most visited
place
with the percentage were 17% and 16%, respectively. Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland in Windsor reached very minimum visitors
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and
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each
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achieved ten
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percent
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of tourists.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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