The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise it.
The pie chart
bellow
illustrates the percentage of the most to least popular of Britain recreational places which visitors visited in 1999.
Correct your spelling
below
Overall
, the most visited area was Theme Parks with the
percentage of 38%. It was slightly different with Museums and galleries Correct article usage
a
visitor
with the difference Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
was
by 1 Wrong verb form
being
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, the least visited place
was Wildlife Parks and Zoos which is only 9 percents
.
Within Theme Parks, the majority of people visited Blackpool pleasure beach until it reached the highest visiting Fix the agreement mistake
percent
place
for
about 47 Change preposition
of
percents
. Fix the agreement mistake
percent
While
, Alton Towers and Pleasureland in the Soutports became the second most visited place
with the percentage were 17% and 16%, respectively. Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland in Windsor reached very minimum visitors which
each Correct word choice
and
place
achieved ten percents
of tourists.Fix the agreement mistake
percent
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