You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be there for three months, and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental office. In your letter •Tell them how long you are staying •Describe the type of accommodation you would like •Explain what facilities you will need nearby You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I will be moving to Da Nang for the next three months for my jobs, I am looking for a suitable place to rent in that period. I am looking for a place to have a motorbike for rent to help me go to work easily and for driving around the city in my free time. I just need a house with one bedroom, one bathroom and one kitchen. I

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need internet access as I will be working at home two days per week on my laptop and meeting with the office. I am going to spend time cooking after work so the place near the market or the supermarket is an advantage. I would like you to know that I really appreciate

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there are Churches within a reasonable distance from the house because I will go to church every Sunday. If you have anything you may feel suitable,

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I would be interested to hear from you. Warm regards, Mai Huong

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