You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter •Explain what type of car you would like •Give details of when you would like the car •Request more information about the cost You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to arrange a rental

car

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for my trip to Da Lat City next week. I will be arriving on May 15th

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I will stay there for 4 days. The visit will be more convenient if I have the vehicle to drive

within

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during

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that period. I would be grateful if you could drive the

car

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to Thanh Buoi bus station

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I will pick up the

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there. My arrival time is about 5:30-6:00 am. As I will be travelling with my two friends,

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luggage so we are looking for a small

car

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, 4 seats. We are going to plan to go

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to many

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places

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we need a

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in good condition. If you don’t mind, let us know about the costs and the confirmation before May 10th or as soon as possible so we can get

this

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arranged. Warm regards, Mai Huong

yeshomeclass

May 16, 2023

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grammar

Some long sentences make the read hard. Try shorter lines and a clear flow.

vocabulary

Use simple words and small phrases to keep to easy words.

content

Be clear about pickup and drop off, and who brings the car and where.

content

Ask for price in a direct way, for example 'Please confirm the price.'

tone

Polite tone and clear goal.

content

Gives date, place and car size.

style

Warm close at the end.

style

Good start with a polite opening.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

151 words

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