Your English speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn, explain how your friend could learn this sport, suggest that you both learn this sport together.

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Dear Susan, It's really a pleasure to know that you want to get trained in a sport which you have not learnt earlier. I personally feel you wouldn't get a better chance to do
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time as in the next two months you have your summer
vacations
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. If you ask me, Swimming would definitely be a great option for you as it has numerous health benefits. Another advantage of choosing swimming is that you can
practice
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it alone once you've learnt it from a trainer.
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, unlike other sports, you don't need a team for swimming, so you can do it at your own convenience. There is
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complex in our area which runs a course in swimming. At
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you have to get yourself registered as a member by paying a nominal
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and
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you can get enrolled for the classes. As far as I know, they conduct daily classes both in the morning and evening which lasts for 1 hour. You can choose any of the two batches. If you plan to join the swimming class, I would
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like to come with you as I have always wanted to learn
swimming
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but never got a chance to do that. It would be great to learn it in your company. We can have a lot of fun too!! Do think about the option and let me know about your decision. If you wish, I can come
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you for any
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enquiry. Take care Nisha
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