Write a letter to a local authority by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. -Mention about the current sports facilities available -What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? -How would the new sports facilities be a help for the people in your age group?

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Heena Chaddi, residing Streetsville, Mississauga. I am writing
this
letter to request you regarding having some extra fitness amenities in our area. As we already have ample community centres in our locality with different facilities. No doubt, the one in the Streetsville area has a small swimming pool for the kids, a fitness centre for men only, and yoga classes for women. But it still seems like limited facilities. As far as I am concerned I felt like the swimming pool should be a little bigger than it is now so that every age group can take advantage.
Moreover
, only men can access the gymnasium, it should be open for women as well.
In addition
to that, the community centre should render swimming classes for all age groups
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for the children. All these amenities can render multiple benefits to us. People of our age do not need to go far for their activities as it would be easy for us, and it can save us time and money.
Furthermore
, more folks will attract to your centre and it will enhance the revenue for the community too. I hope you will take my request into consideration. Looking forward to your positive response. You're Sincere, Heena
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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