The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word
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The given bar chart illustrates changes
about
the percentage of Change preposition
in
people
were
born origin in Correct pronoun usage
who were
Australia
and people
who were born outside this
country. There are three types of areas
of living, which is cities
, towns
, and rural areas
. This
figure recorded
between 1995 and 2010. It can be clearly seen that Add a missing verb
was recorded
people
who live in urban areas
or cities
were dominated in
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by
both
people
who born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
and outside Australia
for two recorded years. The least area inhabitant were rural
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in rural
areas
.
In 1995, cities
were Correct article usage
the favorite
favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
place
to live by Fix the agreement mistake
places
both
of
communities either Change preposition
apply
people
born in Australia
or outside Australia
. There was 50% of people
who
born in Correct pronoun usage
apply
Asutralia
Correct your spelling
Australia
live
in Wrong verb form
lived
the
urban, Correct article usage
apply
while
20% of people
live in towns
and the rest of people
live in rural Correct article usage
the people
areas
. Meanwhile, people
born outside Australia
prefer live in the cities
and recorded by 60% of people
, 10% and 40% people
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of people
libe
in Correct your spelling
live
towns
and rural areas
cosequtively
.
Correct your spelling
consecutively
The
next 15 years, Change preposition
For the
cities
was
still dominated area Change the verb form
were
that
lived by Correct pronoun usage
apply
both
of
type of Change preposition
apply
people
recorded in the graphic. More than 50% of people
live in the cities
for both
of people
, meanwhile
less than 20% of Add a comma
,meanwhile
people
live in towns
and rural areas
. The huge gap was significant
present in Change the word
significantly
this
year between people
live
in Wrong verb form
living
cities
and other areas
.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, australia, areas, cities, towns, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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