The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph and pie chart provide information about the number of
books
borrowed from four village
over a Change to a plural noun
villages
four month
period and the types of Add a hyphen
four-month
book
borrowed. Fix the agreement mistake
books
Overall
, west
eaton
and church
mount had a similar increase. However
, rye
slip,
showed a decline gradually during the period given and Remove the comma
apply
Sutton
wood
saw a large fluctuation.
First of all, in June, the borrowing of books
in Sutton
wood
and Correct your spelling
Wood
Rye
slip began fairly high, at 300 and 250 books
respectively, West
Eaton
and church
mound were the lowest with the same number. In contrast
, Sutton
wood
plummeted to its lowest point in Correct your spelling
Wood
august
followed by Correct your spelling
August
Rye
slip, whereas
west
eaton
and church
mount rose together. In
the end of the period given, Change the preposition
At
Sutton
wood
jumped to 300 Correct your spelling
Wood
books
which was
Change the verb form
were
same
as Correct article usage
the same
Rye
slip
in June but Correct your spelling
Slip
Rye
slip
showed no growth and end with 250 Correct your spelling
Slip
books
. Moreover
, west
eaton
and church
mount had the same number of books
borrowed.
On the other hand
, the most of books
borrowed was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
a
fiction Correct article usage
apply
with
43% and followed by biography at 19%. Change preposition
at
Furthermore
, history and science were identical at 19% and the least popular was self-help at 10%.Submitted by farel2300 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, west, eaton, church, rye, sutton, wood with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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