formal A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my views about your company's decision to invest some money in sponsoring a sports team for native children or pay for the organisation of two open-air concerts. In my opinion,I would like to say that usage of wealth for the sports team is an outstanding way of assisting those kids who are interested in playing outdoor games but do not have a sufficient amount of funds for supplies.

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, there are two great advantages .

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, it can divert the mind of students from electronic games to sports which can keep them fit and healthy.

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,it could help in finding out a sportsman with a hidden talent.

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,I do not think there are many benefits of sponsoring concerts except it can provide people with a sense of relaxation from their jobs and household duties.The community can entertain themselves and enjoy their time . Being a responsible citizen, I would prefer to say that you should spend more cash for the betterment of children and splurge a portion of the money to arrange a small concert or something else for the enjoyment of people. I hope my thoughts will help you to take a good decision. Yours Faithfully, Jack Lee

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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207 words

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