A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to provide you with general feedback about your plan of sponsorship. Based on public opinion, financing the sports team may help the club can buy better types of equipment, so the club will become more attractive to young people.
As a result
, more children will join the club, and
this
deter them from joining the local gangs. Sponsoring two open-air concerts
also
can be beneficial. It attracts more tourists to the district, and more local shops can be benefited from an increase in sales.
Furthermore
, the concert will improve the
overall
picture of the city in the news. I believe that spending money on the local sports team has more advantages both for the company and city dwellers because in the long run, more children become more active and the public will acquire more knowledge about the company. I hope that my research can be helpful to your company. Yours faithfully, Amir Ghasemi
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