The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The chart and table illustrate changing in incomes
of
exporting various kinds of Change preposition
from
goods
Use synonyms
such
as petroleum, engineered commodities, gems and Linking Words
jewellery
, agricultural Use synonyms
goods
and textiles between 2015 and 2016.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
compare
to 2015, except Change the form of the verb
compared
gems
and Change preposition
for gems
jewellery
, other Use synonyms
value
of exported Change the wording
values
goods
Use synonyms
were
increased respectively from 0.81% to 15.24%.
Given Unnecessary verb
apply
this
chart, the biggest value in two years was petroleum things, around between 60 to 70 billion dollars. The second earnings was engineered Linking Words
goods
, it Use synonyms
also
slightly Linking Words
incresed
from 55 to over 60 Correct your spelling
increased
increases
billions
. Change to singular
billion
Geams
and Correct your spelling
Gems
jewellery
incomes went down a little bit Use synonyms
than
in 2015. Correct quantifier usage
more than
Also
, gains from Linking Words
agricultre
were the same in two years Correct your spelling
agriculture
while
textiles Linking Words
were risen
.
From the table, Change to the active voice
rose
have risen
values
of exports were changed in two years. The biggest change in values of exported products was showed in textiles, about increasing 15.24% Correct article usage
the values
while
the smallest change was agricultural part, Linking Words
resulted
in Correct pronoun usage
which resulted
0.81
% Correct article usage
a 0.81
increased
. Other exports Wrong verb form
increase
were
increased, but gems and Unnecessary verb
apply
jewellery
Use synonyms
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
decresed
Correct your spelling
decreased
around
5.18%.Change preposition
by around
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, jewellery with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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