The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The chart and table illustrate changing in incomes
of
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exporting various kinds of
goods
such
as petroleum, engineered commodities, gems and
jewellery
, agricultural
goods
and textiles between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
,
compare
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to 2015, except
gems
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for gems
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and
jewellery
, other
value
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values
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of exported
goods
were
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increased respectively from 0.81% to 15.24%. Given
this
chart, the biggest value in two years was petroleum things, around between 60 to 70 billion dollars. The second earnings was engineered
goods
, it
also
slightly
incresed
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increased
increases
from 55 to over 60
billions
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billion
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.
Geams
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Gems
and
jewellery
incomes went down a little bit
than
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more than
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in 2015.
Also
, gains from
agricultre
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agriculture
were the same in two years
while
textiles
were risen
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rose
have risen
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. From the table,
values
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the values
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of exports were changed in two years. The biggest change in values of exported products was showed in textiles, about increasing 15.24%
while
the smallest change was agricultural part,
resulted
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which resulted
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in
0.81
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a 0.81
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%
increased
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increase
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. Other exports
were
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apply
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increased, but gems and
jewellery
were
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apply
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decresed
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decreased
around
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by around
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5.18%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, jewellery with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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