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You work for a small company. Your manager has asked you to arrange a party in a restaurant for everyone from your workplace.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I work for TFD Insurance and am writing to inquire about making a booking at your restaurant for a company party. There are 25 of us and we would like to come at 7 p.m. on June 6. The main purpose of the event is to thank the employees for their work and we will be presenting some awards to staff members
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. It would be perfect if we could reserve a private dining room for
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. In terms of the food that we require, we are interested in Banquet Option B from your menu, with dessert and coffee, as it provides a lot of variety and caters well for vegetarian guests. I see that there are
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 gluten-free options which we would like to order in advance for four people. It would be much appreciated if you could provide us with a quote for the total cost of the banquet and room hire for 25 people and,
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, if you could let me know if we can make a reservation for 6 June. If you have any questions in relation to
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, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully Amir
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