The bar charts shows the details the percentage of two types of television programmes, namely reality and game shows watched by males and females in different age groups in Australia.
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The bar charts
shows
the details Change the verb form
show
the
percentage of two types of television programmes, namely Change preposition
of the
reality
and game shows watched by males and females in different age groups in Australia.
It can be seen from the graph that, women demonstrates
an upward trend by taking in 70 % regarding Correct subject-verb agreement
demonstrate
the
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reality
shows. In comparison with reality
shows, the proportion of males and females who watch game shows were
similar between with each other.
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reality
show
, the lowest percentage was people aged 16-24, at around 52% and the highest proportion was individuals between the ages of 45 and more, with approximately 68%. As regards Fix the agreement mistake
shows
with
game shows, inhabitants aged 25-34 watched less than any other age Change preposition
apply
groups
. Fix the agreement mistake
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, the figure for games shows proves that was the most popular entertainment programmes
among people aged 45+ than other age groups . People aged 45+ Fix the agreement mistake
programme
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the most amateurs of these two shows.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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