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Some people today believe that world’s population increase is unsustainable and will eventually lead to global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In recent decades, There is no doubt that people are becoming busier and busier. Recently, studies showed that social obstacles between
children
 and
parents
 are increasing dramatically.
While
 some parts of society believe that the problem is
due to
parents
 spending huge
time
 at work , others reject
this
 notion. In my view,
parents
 should place more effort
in
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 enjoying
time
 with their
children
 special teenagers, who are the fuel of societies
To begin
 with, One of the key and foremost reasons behind
this
 concern is that
children
 are easily influenced by the environment
themaround
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them around
, so
parents
 must to beside teenagers and guide them in
this
 stage.
Moreover
,
Parents
 must give
children
 their own space to build their personalities and
to
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boost confidence. by making their choices and make decisions.
Although
 many
parents
 feel scared and worried about their sons and daughter at
this
 age and some act with a huge number of restrictions destroying the child's mental health.
In addition
,
Parents
 may give more
time
 to their
children
 to hear their problems.
Furthermore
,
parents
 must believe that obstacle of
this
 generation is completely different from
past
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 period and to communicate with the new generation
parents
 must adapt to the way of thinking of
this
 generation . On balance , I believe that
parents
 must spend more
time
 with their
children
 and always try to guide them to take the right choices in a world that has many bad influencing aspects.
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