The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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bar chart illustrates the difference in the degree of people who have post-school education in Australia among men and women in 1999. From it can be concluded that the most popular qualification in Australia for men is a skilled vocational
diploma
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, and for women is an undergraduate
diploma
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.
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, about 35 per cent of males had an undergraduate
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, it's the most unpopular category for them. Bachelor's degrees had 45 % of them in 1999. Masters's Degree and a postgraduate
diploma
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have 60% and 70% men respectively. The biggest amount of them preferred a skilled vocational
diploma
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.
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, we can see different data for women. A skilled vocational
diploma
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is unpopular for them, only 10% have it,
however
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, it is the most popular for males. Postgraduate diplomas have 30% and Master's Degrees have 40 % of them. Bachelor's degrees have 50% of females, compared with 45% of males. And the most popular is the undergraduate
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for females.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words diploma with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • levels
  • post-school qualifications
  • proportion
  • men
  • women
  • held
  • clear gender disparity
  • Certificate I
  • Certificate II
  • Certificate III
  • Certificate IV
  • Diploma or Higher
  • highest proportion
  • decreases
  • overall
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