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The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
 chart shows changes in the proportion of international students who graduated from a variety of universities across
Canada
. In 2001,
Canada
 is not a popular destination for international students
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the highest proportion of international
graduates
 is 7% in New Brunswick, followed by Nova Scotia at 6%,
while
 in Ontario, there is only 3% of international
graduates
 - the lowest cities across
Canada
. The shift of international students changed by 2006, as there are more international
graduates
 in Canadian Universities. New Brunswick has the highest number of international
graduates
, an increase of 7% in 2001 to 12% in 2006.
However
, British Columbia has rapid growth among all cities, is the figure doubled by 2006. Over the five
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, the changes in the proportion of international
graduates
 have been uneven across
Canada
.
However
, New Brunswick remained the most popular choice among all, with the highest percentage.
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