the diagram shows the recycling of aluminium cans. summarise the instruction by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
the diagram illustrates how the aluminium is recycled. All in all, the steps can be divided into three groups; they are started with the activity outside the factory, continued in the manufacturing place, and finished with the new products.
Once people put the used cans in the recycling bin, they are collected by the trash collector and transported to the factory.Next, they are washed and sorted until shredded and compressed. At the same time as the cans are crushed, they are heated.
The heater machine melts the grated vessels
then
they become liquid. when it is cooler and harder, the solid metal is rolled in 2.5 mm-6mm thick. After that, the material is ready to be reproduced.
The raw product is recycled and becomes a new reusable bottle. Furthermore
, 74% of aluminium containers in the UK are made of recycled material.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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