The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gave information regarding post-school certificates in Australia
according to
different gender in 1999.
It is clear that
male students
got skilled, postgraduate, and master's degrees more than female students
. By contrast
, the women in the school got undergraduate and bachelor diplomas higher than men of that.
On the one hand, it is notable that nearly 90% of male students
got professional certificates, far higher than the percentage of females at only 10%. Moreover
, the number of male students
who hold postgraduate diplomas was almost 70%, double for the female of that, with about 30%. At last
, the percentage of male students
who got a master's degree was 60% more than that of female students
at 40%.
On the other hand
, undergraduate female students
were 70%, while
that of male students
was around 40%. Furthermore
, Male and female students
with bachelor's degrees differed slightly, about 48% and 52%.Submitted by fuwei0316 on
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