The chart below show what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing thier undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below show what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing thier undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie
chrat
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chart
illustrates the career of graduates from
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the antholopology
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antholopology
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anthropology
department in the form of
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while
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the table indicates several types of earnings in different categories of jobs.
Overall
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, what stands out from the data is that
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the vast majority of the leavers from the university is employed as
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full-time worker, there is a certain amount of them who do not land a steady job. Meanwhile, it
also
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can be seen that private enterprises afford to give their
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relatively less wages compared to freelance consultants and public sectors.
To begin
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with the pie chart, it is remarkable that
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52% of antholopogoly graduates
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nine to five work 15% of them selected part-time one.
On the other hand
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, these jobs are conducted with
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postgraduate
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study by some ex-students at the rate
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% for the former type of employment and 5% for the latter. As for the
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remaining
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fifth of them,
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proportion is accounted
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the jobless graduates. With regard to the table, the categories for freelance consultants and government
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bodies
show almost identical
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at 5% and 15% for the workers who earn between $25000 and 49999 and between $50000 and 74999 respectively.
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, we can see the difference in the categories of well-paid
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, whose figure conveys that
government
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the government
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sector is likely to pay more for their employees. Interestingly, apart from 10% of workers in private sectors
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paid under 49999, the other
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workers recorded similar
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ranged
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between 20% and 35%.
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