the bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in a various activities in ine month in 2015.

the bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in a various activities in ine month in 2015.
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The bar chart compares the percentages of families owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales over a period of 98 years (1918-2011)
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, during the first half of the period, the
percentage
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of
households
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living in rented accommodation was higher than those owning their own
houses
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.
However
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, during the second half of the period,
this
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pattern was reversed. In 1918, nearly 80% of
households
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were renting their
houses
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, which was three times higher than the
percentage
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of families owning their
houses
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, which stood at around 25%. By 1971, there was a gradual decline in the trend of renting
houses
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, dropping to approximately 50%.
Conversely
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, the proportion of families owning
houses
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increased steadily to around 50%, equaling the
percentage
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of rented
houses
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. By 2011, the
percentage
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of
households
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renting their
houses
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continued its downward trend, reaching its lowest point of only 30% in 2001.
In contrast
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, the trend of
households
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owning their own accommodation continued to grow, peaking at nearly 70% before experiencing a slight decline to approximately 65% in 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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