Your recently visited a store and didn't like the customer service there. Write a complaint letter to the store manager and say -What was the issue there? -Why wasn't the staff helpful? -Suggest what can be done about it

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to make a complaint about the customer service I

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received from your sale representative at your shoe store yesterday.

Last

week I saw an advertisement for a sale that will occur during the next month,

Therefore

I've arrived at the store, looking to purchase some new shoes.

However

, when I arrived, it was so overpopulated with customers, and there were only two staff members, running and, trying to help everyone. When I tried to ask the manager for

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shoe size, He gave me a rude answer, and

nevertheless

, decided to ignore me,

therefore

I decided to leave

immediaetly

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immediately

. Undoubtedly, the amount of staff could not handle

this

situation, since there were just too many people inside, yelling, and pushing. But, I would expect a representative, to treat all people with respect, and answer

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. It will be wise to consider some changes for next time. First and foremost, I would suggest hiring additional staff members for the purpose of improving the service

that is

given to your clients,

this

way more hands can help to respond to everyone's needs.

Moreover

, you should make it clear that there is a certain way to communicate with people. Refreshing the importance of basic manners will be highly recommended. I hope that

after

this

letter, incidents like

this

will never happen again

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and that you will give your full attention to

this

matter. Yours Faithfully, Emma Stone.