The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The food consumption could vary from country to another and that could be as a part of so many reasons like some of these countries could has a population, the food tyoes that they are used to eat, if we took four countires in example Campodia, Poland, Egypt and Mexico we will find out that the highest consumption in
rice
would be in Campodia, in the other hand people dont seem likely to use
much of wheat
and it has the lowest rate as calories
per person and they also
use
one hundered and three of Maize
, If we took a look on another country such
as egypt we will find out that the people in it consume more calories
of wheat
per person per day
which is about 1095 and also
they use
501 of rice
and 578 of Maize
which is quite the highest between the two other countries such
as Campodia and Poland, since we mentiond Poland the rates
of consume for the person per day
it has minimum rates
the Rice
rates
would be 19 and they dont use
the Maize
at all and actually their consumption is centered on Wheat
by 865 calories
per day
, that leaves us with Mexico that use
57 of rice
and 275 of wheat
and the has the highest rates
on Maize
by 1083 calories
per day
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