The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
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The graphs illustrate a percentage of
computer
accessibility, where the first graph
shows the general population’s trend between 2002 and 2010, and the second graph
shows the relationship of
Change preposition
between
computer
possession and education divided by various levels from the years 2002 and 2010.
In the first graph
, in 2002, computer
usage was at 55%, which rose gradually to about 5% every 2 years and reached 75% in 2010. In total, the percentage of computer
usage grew significantly by about 20% in an 8-year period.
The second graph
presents the same direction of the growth of computer
accessibility in the educational market, in which the proportions of those who hold higher graduation qualifications were notably higher than those with lower education levels in both years. For example
, in 2002, the rate
of no highschool
diploma was around 15%, Correct your spelling
high school
while
the rate
of postgraduate qualification was around 75%. In comparison, in 2010, the rate
of no highschool
diploma escalated to about 45%, Correct your spelling
high school
while
the rate
of postgraduate qualification almost reached the peak to
about 95%. Change preposition
of
Overall
, the proportions of those below the bachelor’s degree
level increased by approximately 30%, while
the figure for bachelor’s degree
and master’s degree
holders rose by around 20%, which is 10% less.
In conclusion, computer
ownership generally increased for
about 20% between 2002 and 2010. Change preposition
by
Moreover
, in 2002 and 2010, no highschool
diploma, high school Correct your spelling
high school
graduate
and college students gained significantly greater access, by up to 30%, Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
while
bachelor’s degree
and postgraduate qualification holders expanded the usage of computers at the same level of
the general trend by 20%.Change preposition
as
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