The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graphs show a percentage of people who owned a

computer

from 2002 to 2010

,

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and illustrate a group of education levels between 2002 and 2010.

Overall

,

computer

ownership increased

totally

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20

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of 20

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percent

from 2002 to 2010. In 2002, it started at 55

percent

and

then

rose gradually

5

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percent

every 2 years until 75

percent

in 2010. Another bar graph illustrates a group of different education levels between 2002 and 2010. People who have no high school diploma owned a

computer

one-third in 2002 when compared to 2010. In 2010, a group of high school graduates owned a

computer

double the percentage than in 2002. Current students in

college owned

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college-owned

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approximately 50

percent

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per cent

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in 2002,

then

rose to 80

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per cent

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in 2010. Bachelor’s

degree

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degrees

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and postgraduate degrees had a similar trend in both years, which increased about 20

percent

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per cent

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each between 2002 and 2010. They increased

around

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from around

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75

percent

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per cent

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to 95

percent

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per cent

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.