The consumption of coffee and tea buying between five Australians' cities. Summarise and report the information.

Through
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this
essay, will compare the different consumption of
coffee
and
tea
buying between five
Australians’
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Australians
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cities. Many individuals used to have their morning
coffee
or
tea
as take away from their favourite
coffee
shop, So we will take five Australian cities as
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examples
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to compare
between
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the percentage of people living there and buying fresh
coffee
, buying
instant
coffee
and going to a
cafe
for a
coffee
or
tea
. People in Sydney
prefers
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prefer
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to go to the
cafe
for having
coffee
or
tea
. As we can see that, more than 60% of the city
residents
went
for
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to
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cafe
for a
coffee
tea
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or tea
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in the
last
4
weeks
.
However
, nearly 45% of them bought
instant
coffee
while
less than 45% of the
residents
bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
4
weeks
. Comparing
Melborune
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Melbourne
and Brisbane we find that both
residents
prefers
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to go to
cafe
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a cafe
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for
coffee
and
tea
and usually buy
instant
coffee
more than
instant
coffee
.
On the other hand
, we can find that only 50% of Adelaide
residents
bought
instant
coffee
over the
last
4
weeks
while
less than 35% of them bought fresh
coffee
. Horbart’s
residents
are more likely
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other Australians’
residents
in the five cities they
bough
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bought
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instant
coffee
more than fresh
coffee
in the
last
4
weeks
and went to
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a cafe
the cafe
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cafe
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cafes
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for
coffee
or
tea
more with
high
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a high
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significant percentage.
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