You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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Information is presented by a bar chart which compares the total spending on three particular purposes, classified by 5 different
age
groups of citizens in the UK in 2004. Overall
, it can be clearly seen that while
the popularity of food
and drink, and entertainment
increased as people
got older, the demand for restaurant
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restaurants
hotel
changed in the opposite direction.
Turning to the first main feature, Fix the agreement mistake
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people
who were under 30 years
old were the majority group
that spent on restaurant
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restaurants
hotel
, amounting to just below 15% of the total spending, Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
whereas
older people
in the 61-75 age
group
spent on this
category the least, accounting for approximately 2%. In addition
, there was a little more than 10% of the total spending which was contributed by people
who were in the 31-45 and 46-60 age
group
equally.
Turning to another main feature, in terms of food
and drink, there was only just above 5% of the total spending, paid by people
who were under 30 years
old. Nevertheless
, the expenditure ratio rose as the number of
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age
was higher. The largest proportion of spending on Fix the agreement mistake
ages
food
and beverage was about 23%, contributed by people
who were 76 years
old or over.
Focusing further
on the last
category (entertainment
), the proportion of the total disbursement grew when people
were older. There was just a little more than 5%, spent by people
who were below 30 years
old on entertainment
. However
, the ratio of the spending on entertainment
rose to around 23% for people
who were in 61
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the 61
age
group
, which is the highest percentage and also
the same number as that for people
in more-than-76
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the more-than-76
age
group
who spent on food
and beverage.Submitted by hayfa.alkhalifa1 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, food, entertainment, people, years, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "a little more than" was used 2 times.
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