the pie charts below shop the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The pie charts illustrate shopping online monetary for 4 fields in a 10-year period, between 2003 and 2013 in New Zealand. In general, from 2003 to 2013, there was an upward trend for film/music and books,

whereas

, the proportion for travel and clothes after 10 years. The wholesale of shopping online is divided equally among all sectors.

It is clear that

in 2003, online shopping for travel took the highest rate by 36%. Meanwhile, the rate of clothes and film/music was 24% and 21% respectively.

Besides

, 19% was the lowest ratio of shopping online monetary.

However

, after 10 years, in 2013, there was a big change in online shopping profit-making when the highest percentage was the rate of film/music at 33%,

by contrast

, travel decreased to only 29%.

In addition

, there was an increase in book wholesale to reach 22%,

on the other hand

, New Zealand people cut off payment for shopping for clothes online.

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Topic Vocabulary:

retail sectors
online shopping sales
percentage increase/decrease
significant growth/decline
electronic goods
clothing and footwear
food and beverages
household goods
recreational goods
stable sales
emerging sectors
overall growth
decade comparison
shift in consumer behavior
e-commerce
trend analysis
market dynamics
purchasing habits

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