the pie charts below shop the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The two pie charts show information on Internet shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. A period of 10 years.
Overall
, it can seem that the stores were a sale in four things called, travelling, film and music, books
and clothes
. In 2003, the highest proportion of sales was travelling and in 2013 the highest percentage was entertainment. In contrast
, the lowest was books
in 2003 and clothes
were lowest in 2013 respectively.
To start with, in the year 2003 presented that there was 36 per cent
for travelling and it is very higher than the others. Followed by clothes
at 24 per cent
and entertainment likes movies and films at 21 per cent
. On the other hand
, books
were very low the percentage was 19 per cent
.
In 2013, all things increased from 2013 ,but, travelling declined from 36 per cent
to 29 per cent
. And the entertainment was higher than other things at 33 per cent
. Followed by travelling, books
and clothes
respectively.Submitted by itchayatop31 on
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