The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

These two charts indicate the difference between

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in 1958 from 2008

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and show the percentage of

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that

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spent on different activities.

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two of the main parts in both charts are working and sleeping in overview, and the most difference between the two charts is the times of relaxing and going out with friends and family.

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people in 2008 spent 9% more of their

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working than in 1958;

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, they slept 7% less than in 1958. It indicates that people in 2008 might be more tired than in 1958.

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a lack of sleep,

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in 2008 spent 5% more of their

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relaxing at home.

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, the

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of going out with friends or family dramatically declined by about 13% in 2008.

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, the

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of travel to work increase

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%. It indicates that

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in 2008 might live far from the place where they worked.