You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the training course you want to do, explain what the company could do to help you, say how the course will be useful for your job.
Dear Mr Aliyev,
I am writing to explain that I would like to attend
to
a course which will be handy for our speciality.
As you know, I have been working at your company for 5 years. I had Change preposition
apply
a
difficulty Correct article usage
apply
to talk
with foreign customers. I have seen an advertisement for a language centre. I am going to learn English. If I go to Change the verb form
talking
this
, I can speak English after a year.
I will be pleased if you help me with regard to working time. I can work from morning to afternoon. Linking Words
Then
I need to go Linking Words
my
course. My Change preposition
to my
collegue
is willing to do my tasks Correct your spelling
colleague
while
I am not at the office. I will be happy if you allow Linking Words
to
Correct pronoun usage
me to
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this
.
It is very important for our job. Even though we worked efficiently, our clients from abroad were leaving our company. Because we could not talk with them. If I can speak English very well, our customers will increase. Add a missing verb
do this
Therefore
, it will be essential for our development.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Kholida TurgunovaLinking Words
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