You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the training course you want to do, explain what the company could do to help you, say how the course will be useful for your job.

Dear Mr Aliyev, I am writing to explain that I would like to attend
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a course which will be handy for our speciality. As you know, I have been working at your company for 5 years. I had
a
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difficulty
to talk
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with foreign customers. I have seen an advertisement for a language centre. I am going to learn English. If I go to
this
, I can speak English after a year. I will be pleased if you help me with regard to working time. I can work from morning to afternoon.
Then
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course. My
collegue
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is willing to do my tasks
while
I am not at the office. I will be happy if you allow
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. It is very important for our job. Even though we worked efficiently, our clients from abroad were leaving our company. Because we could not talk with them. If I can speak English very well, our customers will increase.
Therefore
, it will be essential for our development. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Kholida Turgunova
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coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure of the letter to enhance coherence and cohesion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • training course
  • skillset enhancement
  • educational leave
  • sponsorship
  • reimbursement
  • knowledge integration
  • work efficiency
  • career progression
  • continuing education
  • team contribution
  • productivity boost
  • expertise building
  • industry standards
  • hands-on experience
  • networking opportunities
  • cutting-edge techniques
  • best practices
  • return on investment
  • in-house training
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