The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about how a 28-year period from 1974. The data is measured in million tonnes for road, water, rail and pipeline modes of transport.
goods
were transported in the UKUse synonyms
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over
Overall
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it is clear that
there was a substantial increase Linking Words
of
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in
goods
by road, water and pipeline Use synonyms
transports
over the period shown. By stark contrast the indication for rail transported Fix the agreement mistake
transport
goods
experienced a dramatic decline, afterwards, it stagnated Use synonyms
is
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in
first
position until 2002.
Looking at the details, the number of Change the article
the first
goods
by road and water went up considerably from their initial around 70 to just under 100 and from about 40 to just over 60 between 1974 and 2002 Use synonyms
accordingly
. The quantity of transported Linking Words
goods
by pipeline was almost 1 million in 1794, it rocketed by over 20 till 2002
By stark contrast, the figure for Use synonyms
rail transported
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rail-transported
goods
almost remained unchanged until 2002, Use synonyms
while
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this
figure witnessed visible fluctuation between around 16 years from its initial 40 in 1974.Linking Words
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