One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports trainer. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. In your letter say how well you know your friend describe the qualifications and experience that your friend has explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.

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Dear Mr. Jacob, I am writing
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to request you to please consider my friend’s job application for the position of
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trainer
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for our school camp. My name is Harsh Rewari. I am studying in standard 5th. My friend’s name is Rahul. His younger brother and I both are best friends.
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, both of them are our family friends. Rahul has done Masters in
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management. With his good grades, he got placed in Xavier’s as an assistant
sports
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trainer
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, where he educated 100 students about the benefits of
sports
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in our daily life.
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after 2 years, he switched his job and became the senior
sports
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trainer
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at Trent University, where he managed 1500 students and helped the university win on various occasions.
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, considering the quality of experience I think he would be the perfect fit for the role of a
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trainer
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. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Harsh Rewari
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