The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
The line chart illustrates the data of
books
from June to September 2014 that were lent in four different village libraries,
as well as
the pie graph presents the proportion of
books
which were lent during
this
time
according to
classification.
Overall
, it is apparent that most people borrow these
books
at distinct times in four villages and fiction is the kind of book most favoured over
this
time.
To begin
with, the figure for the Rye slip was a dramatically downward trend its start point was 300
patterns
in June, but
then
slowly fell to half
patterns
compared to the first month.
On the other hand
, the rest of other libraries have these
patterns
which are borrowed much more in the
last
month, when both West Eaton and Church Mount were the same data in June and September respectively 50
books
and 150
books
.
Additionally
, the number of Sutton Wood saw its highest point (300
books
)
last
time,
however
, it strongly decreased in August (100
patterns
) To turn to the pie chart, fiction is the most preferred when it has lent more than 40%.
Moreover
, there were similar percentages of science and history which accounted for 10%, the type of self-help and biography respectively 10% and 19%.
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