Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about lerning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain hoiw your frind could learn this sport suggest that you both learn thios sport together.

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Dear Tim, I’m writing
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to recommend the
cricket
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training classes in a club near me. Yesterday, I received your letter, you asked about learning a new sport, why not try
cricket
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? After all, it is one of the top sports in India. In fact, when we were younger, you always said that one day you would learn to play
cricket
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. I’ve heard that a club near to my place is starting cricketing classes in the month of July. So, you just have to register on their website with your name, mobile number, and email,
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they would contact you for full details and fee structure. I’ve another idea, I’d
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join you in these classes as
cricket
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also
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fascinates me. In fact, if we both will do training together
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we might get an extra discount from them. Plus, we can
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spend some time together as we’ve not met for a long period. Hope you’ll like my recommendation. All the best, Jaskaran
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