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days, taxations are abundant .Some Change preposition
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people
think they need spent
, their earned Change the verb form
to spend
money
, they wish things
and Change preposition
for things
people
wont
taxation kept to a minimum. Other Add an apostrophe
won't
people
believe that ,
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apply
people
should pay high levels of tax
in order to support the
public services.Correct article usage
apply
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both Correct your spelling
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of
views are not incorrect. There are some reasons.
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which
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and that
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taxes
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to
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the state
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The government
tax
for
public services, Change preposition
on
such
as public transport, pension and other things
. If people
pay high levels of taxes
public services will be better rather than now.
Nowadays, people
wont
pay Add an apostrophe
won't
tax
minium
level , there are some causes. Many Correct your spelling
minimum
people
earn less money
and they spent that money
on a lot of things
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apply
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children's
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things
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people
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a minium
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minimum
tax
. Most people
do not work high-paid
works and they earn average Change preposition
in high-paid
money
but some people
work in high salary
work, Add a hyphen
high-salary
population
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the population
seperte
rich and poor . They should pay Correct your spelling
separates
taxes
based on their earned .
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conclusion, Change preposition
In
taxs
brings positive effects Correct your spelling
taxes
tax
for
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on
people
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the government
they
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their
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a lot of things
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pensions
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transport
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. although
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a high
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a minimum
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taxes
based on their earned.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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