The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998

The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998
The picture illustrates the rates of spending
money
by adults (men and
women
) and children (boys and girls) in the UK on 4 common goods in 1998. The items include food, electronic equipment,
music
and videos.
Overall
, the most items
that
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were the expenditure on
music
by girls
while
the least was on video by
women
. The number of British adults, both men and
women
, that used their
money
for food was 25%, 14%, and 39% respectively, and they spent only 0,5-2% on videos. The equipment that was the most bought by men was electronic at 10% and
women
only 1%. The
money
that all of the
adults'
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group spent on
music
remained the same at 5%. The most income spent by all gender in children was on
music
at around 38-40% and the least
money
that they invested on food was 10% on average. Electronic equipment that children buy was 23% with 18% being boys. The rate of videos that were taken by the kids group was 12% with the number of boys were 18% and girls at 17%.
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