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THE PROPORTION OF UNDERGRADUATES, POSTGRADUATES, AND OTHER STUDENTS SPENDING TIME IN THE LIBRARY

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library
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 time in the library than
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. In comparison, the per
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healthy
 83,
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(37). The
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half (50%). In comparison,
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spent from eight to fourteen
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postgraduates
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, which spent more than 15
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