The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates the process of producing
electricity
by Use synonyms
geothermal
power plant.
Add an article
the geothermal
a geothermal
Overall
, for producing Linking Words
electricity
, there are five main stages that start from cold Use synonyms
water
and end with a generator turbine which produces Use synonyms
electricity
.
Use synonyms
At
Change preposition
In
first
stage, cold Add an article
the first
water
Use synonyms
pumped
down about 4.5 Add a missing verb
is pumped
kilometers
under the ground. After that, cold Change the spelling
kilometres
water
is injected Use synonyms
to
the geothermal zone to be hot Change preposition
into
water
, the cold Use synonyms
water
crosses Use synonyms
the
underground in three different hot rocks that make the Correct article usage
apply
water
Use synonyms
be
warm. Unnecessary verb
apply
Then
, when the Linking Words
water
is hot, it is pumped up to the ground that goes to the condenser.
That hot Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
which
was pumped up, and went to the condenser which turned to steam. In the final stage, it goes to a turbine and makes it start working. The power from the turbine goes to a generator and that power in the generator produces Correct pronoun usage
apply
electricity
.Use synonyms
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