The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure illustrates the process of producing
electricity
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by
geothermal
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the geothermal
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power plant.
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, for producing
electricity
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, there are five main stages that start from cold
water
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and end with a generator turbine which produces
electricity
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.
At
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first
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the first
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stage, cold
water
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pumped
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down about 4.5
kilometers
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under the ground. After that, cold
water
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is injected
to
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the geothermal zone to be hot
water
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, the cold
water
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crosses
the
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underground in three different hot rocks that make the
water
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be
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warm.
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, when the
water
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is hot, it is pumped up to the ground that goes to the condenser. That hot
water
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which
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was pumped up, and went to the condenser which turned to steam. In the final stage, it goes to a turbine and makes it start working. The power from the turbine goes to a generator and that power in the generator produces
electricity
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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