The chart below shows the levels of employment in different sectors of the UK economy from 1910 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts represent the number and employment rate of
men
and women
on different job schedules in the UK market between 1988 and 2012. Overall
, men
worked mostly on
full-time occupations, Change preposition
in
although
women
placed
Add a missing verb
were placed
part-time
positions in the economy of Change preposition
in part-time
UK
. Correct article usage
the UK
Moreover
, men
who were working on a job much
Add a missing verb
were much
more
higher than Change the word
apply
the
Change the word
their
women
counterpart.
In 1988, just above the
half of Correct article usage
apply
men
population worked as full-time Correct article usage
the men
professions
(%53) which Replace the word
professionals
were
accounted for 12,539 males. Unnecessary verb
apply
This
ratio decreased slightly to %47, but the number of full-time male workers increased to 13,794. On the other hand
, the ratio of part-time male employees only took 6 per cent in 1988 which was
only increased by 1%, eventually, reached roughly two Unnecessary verb
apply
thousands
individuals 24 years later.
Change to singular
thousand
In contrast
, from 1988 to 2012, the number of part-time women
employees rose by approximately three thousands
which Change to singular
thousand
were
equal to roughly one-fourth of the female community. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
In addition
, 22% of women
worked as part-time employees before this
declined by 2%, but increased by around 700 female workers in 2012.Submitted by historicalpen on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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