You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview You should write at least 150 words

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you to apply for the job that you mentioned in the newspaper of Tehran City

firstly

I am working in the magazine

such

a client but my contract will be over on 30th July so

this

is the reason for searching for new work, and after two weeks, I am going to the

deplacing

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displacing

replacing

to the centre of Tehran.

Secondly

, after considering your advertisement I found

that is

so suitable for me because, as I

told

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youtold

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, I will be in the centre of Tehran and fortunately your restaurant is exactly next to my new house, I am really keen on

for

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apply

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working in the restaurant in my opinion, it's will be an incredible experience in the future for me.

Finally

, I need to know the exact time for participating in your interview because I want to plan for it. Thanks for your help and support.

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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faithfully,

Abdolrahman

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Abdulrahman

Omidi

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

155 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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