The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagrams illustrate the way in which
cement
and concrete are produced and how some instruments help us to create concrete which is essential for building houses.
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Overall
, there are 7 stages in the process, starting with crushing Limestone and Clay and ending with mixing Linking Words
cement
with 3 different ingredients.
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Initially
, Limestone and Clay are gone through the crusher stage. Linking Words
Then
, the powder which has been produced earlier is mixed by the mixer. In the subsequent stage, the powder undergoes a rotating heater so as to get heat. Linking Words
Following
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, prior to putting Linking Words
cement
into the bags, the heated elements are passed through the grinder.
In order to produce concrete, the Use synonyms
cement
which is produced in the prior stage serves as a raw material and is mixed with water, sand, and gravel, In the proportion of 15%,10%,25%, and 50%, respectively. Use synonyms
Finally
, these materials are mixed in the concrete mixer and in Linking Words
this
way concrete is made.Linking Words
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