You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given diagram provides information about the
glasses
recycling process.
Overall
, there are 4 main stages of the process, beginning with
glasses
being collected and finishing with recycled products being reused. In the first step, glass bottles are gathered in household or workplace recycling bins.
Then
, they were delivered to a waste treatment plant by a truck. In the next step,
glasses
are cleaned, and kill all bacteria by a dedicated device called a washing and sterilizing machine.
This
process makes the glass safe and eliminates bacteria harmful to humans.
Thirdly
, clean
glasses
are broken into small pieces of glass and melted at high temperatures by a crushing and melting machine.
Next,
they are made into various shapes at the
molding
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moulding
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machine.
Finally
, recycled products are delivered to supermarkets for citizens to continue using. Once used, those products go on to be recycled.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glasses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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