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The bar cart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different groups who did regular phisical activity in 2010.

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The graph compares the proportions of Australian
men
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's and
women
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's
age
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 groups who participated in physical activity on a regular basis in 2010.
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,
it is clear that
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 in 2010
women
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 over 25 were more interested in doing physical activities than
men
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 and in the
age
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 group between 15 to 24, the proportion of
men
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 who exercised regularly was more than that of
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. The bar chart depicts the percentage of Australian males aged 15 to 24 who engaged in regular activity, which stood at 52.8%.
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, as the
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 profile increased to 40, their interest in physical activities decreased.
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, the lowest percentage of active
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 was related to the 35 to 40
age
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 group (39.5%).
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, as
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 aged
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this
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 period, the percentage of those who participated in activities increased moderately from 39.5% to 46.7%.
On the other hand
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, Australian females had a participation rate in sports training between approximately 47% and 53% in 2010. In their middle
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, the proportion of active
women
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 was at the highest level, around 53.3%.
Whereas
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,
women
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 in both younger and older ages had a lower proportion, around 47.7% and 47.1%, respectively.
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