Sugar consumption is too harmful. Some say it is government’s responsibility to limit sugar intake, while others say it’s individual who are responsible. Discuss both views and give you opinion?
We would
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the business and provide the Ball Revive service during the local and national tennis events and tournaments, Correct your spelling
introduce
whereas
most of the participants are our potential customers and there would be a window of opportunity to gain their interest in our business.
I know from personal experience that sales can be highly challenging for our business. I have created new ideas and services in my previous careers. Also
, I have developed several great and innovative ideas, but in addition
to creating them, I have the ability and relevant expertise to convert these ideas into sales. The Ball Revive service is an amazinge
idea that has made the tennis community interested. After gaining these potential customers' interest, they might look at our website to learn about our different solutions, read testimonials and search for promotional sales or other special offers that we usually would be considered for new customers.Correct your spelling
amazing
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite