Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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In these past years, students are most likely not to choose

science

subject as their

majors

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in many countries.

This

issue might cause problems in the future.

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essay

ellaborates

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the

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on the

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reasons contributing to

this

problem and the impacts

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this

phenomenon. First of all,

science

is knowingly a hard course to study both the theories and experiments.

Besides

, it is expected that students have persistence and

hardworking

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personality in order to pass

this

major.

Whereas

, it makes youngsters

considering

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whether they should take it.

Furthermore

, since it will take a lot of

time

studying

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and

experimenting

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, students will have less

time

to do

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activities to pursue their hobbies and make money as a part-timer. These factors might be the reasons why

science

is becoming unpopular nowadays.

This

trend will eventually cause several serious repercussions that need to be tackled.

Science

is like a

well oiled

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machine that keeps our lives going. As

the

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time

goes by,

science

have

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to keep up with the

environments

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and current health issue.

For example

, the

COVID 19

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vaccine is a brand new discovery since the virus emerged in 2020. If there were not enough

scientist

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scientists

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to do the research, people will keep suffering from it. Technology and

medical

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are

proved

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proven

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to be scientifically vital in various aspects.

To sum up

, several reasons account for the diminishing interest in

science

course

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courses

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including high requirements and less

time

for

another activities

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which is a starting point to lead to

another issues

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Hence

, it is significant to plan an approach to get young people to study

science

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep what are problems caused by lack of sleep? what can be done about this lack of sleep?

In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problem is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this?

Economic progress is one way to measure the success of a country, while some people think there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than economic progress?

Some people think companies should employ old people to work as they have a lot of working experience. Others, however, think it is better to recruit young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A faction of people hold(?) the notion that employment in(?) not necessary if there is a stable income. I totally agree with this opinion as ample reasons to substantiate it. This essay will explain my view with relevant illustrations.