The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
These two pie charts
illustrates
the amount of Change the verb form
illustrate
time
spent by people at their productive age. It depicts different activities Use synonyms
were
done in a Correct pronoun usage
that were
a
country in 1958 and 2008.
In general, employed adults spent Remove the redundancy
apply
the
most of Correct article usage
apply
the
Change the word
their
time
working in both Use synonyms
period
. Meanwhile, travelling to work took the least of their Change to a plural noun
periods
time
in 1958 Use synonyms
then
it shifted to go out with their friends and family in Linking Words
the
2008.
In the first period, almost of third of the Change the article
apply
day
was spent Use synonyms
on
working (33%) and slightly less Change preposition
apply
time
Use synonyms
on
sleeping (32%). Going out with friends and family came up with 19% of the Change preposition
apply
time
. Use synonyms
Hence
, all of the other activities combined took 16% of the Linking Words
day
.
50 years later, the percentage of Use synonyms
time
in going to work increased by 9% which makes it almost half of the Use synonyms
day
Use synonyms
whereas
sleeping decreased to 25% of the Linking Words
day
. There is a significant Use synonyms
different
Replace the word
difference
on
the Change preposition
in
time
people allocated Use synonyms
on
going out. It dropped from 19% to 6%. Change preposition
to
In contrast
, the Linking Words
time
of relaxing at home increased by 5% from 1958.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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