The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The two graphics present
the
information about graduate and postgraduate students of different types of future Correct article usage
apply
plane
without full-time Correct your spelling
plans
work
in the UK in 2008.
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Overall
, an obvious feature is that all types of destination Linking Words
were remained
Change to the active voice
remained
have remained
the
same rank for both of the two bar charts. Students who opted Change preposition
at the
Linking Words
further
study where occupy the majority and the voluntary Change preposition
for further
work
were Use synonyms
fewest
people to choose Correct article usage
the fewest
for
both.
Most graduates went to do Change preposition
from
further
study, the number Linking Words
were
almost to reach 30,000. Change the verb form
was
Conversely
, Voluntary Linking Words
work
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were
unpopular, at 3,500. Part-time Change the verb form
was
work
and Unemployment where shared Use synonyms
the
similar number for graduates, Correct article usage
a
which
at 17,735 and 16,235 respectively.
Notably, the number of postgraduates who did the Correct pronoun usage
apply
further
study was similar to part-time Linking Words
work
people, they only got a gap of 190 people. Use synonyms
Postgraduate
who Fix the agreement mistake
Postgraduates
unemployed
were at 1,625 and Add a missing verb
were unemployed
who
did voluntary were the fewest Correct pronoun usage
those who
by
others, Change preposition
apply
which
only at 345.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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