GENERAL TRAINING ONLY You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Each year, your company gives an Employee of the Year award to a worker who has performed exceptionally well. You believe that someone with whom you work should receive the award this year. Write a letter to your supervisor. In the letter - Describe your colleague’s job at the company - Describe a time you worked with this person - Explain why you believe this person deserves the award Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Jackson,

Dear
Ms
. Jackson, I would like to attract your attention
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the exceptional work
Ms.
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Diana
Thompson
has been consistently delivering over the past 12 months. Doing so, I hope you will consider her for the Employee of the Year award.
Ms
Thompson
works as a sales representative in our department since 2015. Her role mostly covers quotations, negotiation, and communication with customers. We worked together on many occasions as I am in charge of coordinating clients' payments.
Last
week,
Ms
Thompson
prepared a list of all delayed invoices and shared it with our team at the finance department.
This
document helped us prepare an accurate
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of the situation for the end-of-month presentation.
While
she always demonstrated a strong motivation from the first day she joined our corporation,
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Thompson
is now bringing additional added value to our organization. As the most experienced employee in the commercial team, she is
also
able to offer coaching to newcomers.
Therefore
, I would kindly suggest you
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acknowledge her attitude and achievements at the award ceremony next month. I strongly believe that
such
recognition will increase her satisfaction and encourage her to stay in our company. Best regards, Nathan Conil
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