The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The given bar graph reveals the amount of leisure
time
of a population in a week
according to
their sex and employment status between 1998-1999.
Overall
,
females
who were part-
time
employees or
housewives
had more spare
time
rather than their male counterparts.
In contrast
, unemployed, retired or full-
time
worked
males
had much more free
time
than the female group. From 1998 to 1999, there
are
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no leisure
time
for
males
was demonstrated for employed part-
time
and
housewives
categories. Employed part-
time
worked
females
,
on the other hand
, had approximately 40
hours
of spare
time
, and
this
time
relatively
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was relatively
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higher for
housewives
. Nearly 50
hours
free
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of free
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time
per week was recorded for
housewives
in the period of 1998-99. Full-
time
employed
males
and
females
both had the least
hours
of
time
compared to their other gender groups. Men had extra 10
hours
than women in the group of full-
time
occupation
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occupations
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.
Moreover
, unemployed and retired
males
and
females
had the most significant leisure
time
in 1998-1999.
Therefore
, the extra
time
for both genders
relatively
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is relatively
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equal for each
groups
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group
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.
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